Comments

FIRST COMMENT

http://atamanes.blogspot.com/2012/11/journal-entry-7.html?showComment=1358683755218#c2415665175992991344

Hey man! I think I will absolutely try it later. You give the information about 'börek' appetisingly. Now I am hungry and I need to eat something. Anyway, I want to say something about some mistakes I think so. Instead of using 's' in 'Tatars-People', it is much more true that using only 'Tatar-People'. Maybe I just misunderstood the word order. The other one is in the line the third. 'A mixture ... and potato is used' is a wrong usage. ' .. are used' should be used, I think. Do not be angry my friend. take it easy. :)

THE SECOND COMMENT

http://kozamtienti.blogspot.com/2013/01/journal-entry-6-video-reflection-steve.html?showComment=1359047578088#c3813656985855856854

Serhat, you found a good point to show us. I like the video and the things you sad about it. The music is perfect, too. The way you used to talk is also good. There is no grammar mistake as far as I check.

THE THİRD COMMENT

http://buse-caliskan.blogspot.com/2012/10/i-brain-odtu.html?showComment=1359049492160#c8003717041268039933

Dear Buse. Your thoughts about this slogan is something good. But I think there is something wrong with grammar or I think so. In the third line 
you can use 'while' instead of 'when'. I think it will be more suitable. There is also something in the last paragraph. In the line the fourth, you can use 'and' without a comma. Sincerely. see you :)