THE REAL ONE
To me, a
university should provide its students lots of things. Social and sportif
facilities, advanced education sytems, enough freedom are among these tings. It
should provide nature not consructures. Student can learn what life is , how
beautiful life is. There is an environment where student can learn how to live,
how to maintain their lifes. I should be able to learn everything I need in my
life. Student can learn what they want. Educators should not force the student to
learn an information that the student does not want. All living things have
different abilities and interests. So, university should give this chance to
them. We all are diffrent persons. World needs to have lots of different types
of characteristics not one type. If a university provide these chances to the
student, each person can be entrepreneur. It helps country’s progress.
I think
METU has some of these. One of them is the natural environment. There lots of
trees and green. There is fresh air due to this fact. Students can take fresh
breath and can fresh their brains. This is one fact. The other is that there is
a big technopolis. Students can take advantage of it. They can grow themselves
up as an entreprneur.
Dear Ahmet,
YanıtlaSilThe features of a university you mentioned in your journal are really important for me, too. I agree with you in terms of the ideas. University students need to be free. They should behave as they want because they are grown-ups. And METU is one of the places that a university student can have those chances. However, I need to talk about some grammar mistakes that you've done. For example, you should use 'provide' by using 'with' in the first sentence. For another example, "There 'are' lots of trees and green." I suppose that you forgot to write it. :) Also, you should pay attention the subject-verb agreement. You wrote "Student can learn what 'they' want." And there were some spelling mistakes such as "We all are 'different' persons." and "They can grow themselves up as an 'entrepreneur.' Out of these mistakes, I liked your ideas and your journal. I am waiting for your upcoming journals. :)